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I'm a piece of coal,
You're the pressure.
You turned me into a perfect diamond.
But you keep pushing,
Harder and harder.
I'm strong so I can take it,
But I'm starting to crack.
You can't see it on the surface,
But look down deep inside.
See the pain I hide.
The cracks grow bigger.
I'm falling apart.
And all 'cuz the pressure,
You put on my heart.
a poem I wrote about how my family is putting too much pressure on me to be perfect. hope you guys like it!
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jzr171 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Student Filmographer
This one is awesome!
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bassiefan1610 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thnx! & thnx 4 all da faves!
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fandomverse95 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Professional Writer
that's beautiful :)
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bassiefan1610 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thnx! & thnx 4 da fave!
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fandomverse95 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Professional Writer
you're welcome ;D
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